Fierce King: An Enemies to Lovers Romance (L.A. Ruthless Series Book 1)

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Fierce King: An Enemies to Lovers Romance (L.A. Ruthless Series Book 1)

Fierce King: An Enemies to Lovers Romance (L.A. Ruthless Series Book 1)

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In Sadie's books, the romance is fierce and often at the heart of the story. Characters like Ryan, who appears in several books including "Chicago Ruthless", are often found wrestling with their feelings while navigating treacherous situations. This book will never be finished. The writing is not good, the premise, story, or characters- it just wasn’t good. Alana is a good person, I like at least that about her. But I’m unable to fall into that because, even if it’s not from Alana’s perspective, the author is truly overdoing it with trying to depict Alana like “she’s not other girls” through Alejandro’s perspective. It ruins it. Like, we don’t need comparison for her to be a wonderful person that Alejandro didn’t expect. But alas, instead of showing us through beautiful language, plot and writing, that author finds the basic-est way to “prove” that Alana isn’t… Instead of showing us their interaction as they are pretending to be a couple and outrageously flirting with each other, our author just tells us that happened. No dialogue, just a paragraph saying, “Yup, we did this.” And what’s worst is this is the first time these two have supposedly acted romantic with each other, even if it is an act. You would think that would warrant an actual scene rather than just a drive by, half paragraph, surmising. This is said paragraph:

Thank you HI I was told that I need a super librarian to help me merge the two copies of my books Ryan Rule { New York Ruthless Book 1 }

It’s so convenient and weird to have both of their mothers unknowing of their sham of a marriage. Like…why are these two women portrayed as these “feeble” things that can’t understand business marriages? If 25 year Alana can understand it, then at least one of those grown ass women could as well. And if not even one of those grown women could understand it, then maybe the premise really makes no type of sense. Alana is marrying Alejandro but not for love. She is marrying to save her father’s life. She will never love this monster of a man. Bow down to this king? Never.

He growls and shouts unnecessarily which leads me to question if our author actually imagined what the scenes she creates look like? Because half the time, how our characters are depicted to say a line, does not match the feeling of the scene or the pre developed emotions thrumming the scene along. You growl when you’re frustrated, as a sexual thing, annoyed- something. Nothing that makes sense and has already been established leads to this man growling. It just comes off as weird and as if you just heard that growling men are a thing in erotic novels so you make your male protagonist growl for any nonsense that happens or doesn’t happen or make sense. Like he’s a damn werewolf or something. A GOOD WRITER DOESN’T TELL YOU ITS RAINING…BUT RATHER MAKES YOU FEEL WHAT IT IS LIKE TO BE RAINED UPON….” It does end in a cliffhanger and I was annoyed and depressed when it finished. I havent read a good Mafia/Dark Romance book in awhile and I can't wait for more. Living in the UK with her sons, husband and cute but grumpy dog, she writes stories of heroines with determination and steamy alpha males willing to torch the world for the women they love. They talk dirty and act even dirtier. If I could give this book more stars I would... The characters and plot had me hooked from the beginning, it was so good in fact I read it in a day because I couldn't out it down.

You know you have read a great book when it is all that you think about..... even hours after reading it. Samantha calls Gabriel her angel. The things they do together may feel heavenly but they are certainly not angelic. He feels like the devil and he knows he’s not good enough for her but he just can’t walk away; she needs his help. Her life may depend on it. The supporting characters were fantastic! I really liked Jax and Hugo! Oh Hugo ... Sigh This book was erotic, sensual and sexy hot!! Both Alejandro and Alana together are what fantasies are made of! As they spend time together will they get past the hot AF crazy sexual tension and the amazing chemistry they have? “He pushed his tongue inside, making sure that I could taste myself on him. For some reason, that only made me want to even more.” This is sold as hate to love. Problem: There’s no actual hate. There’s no reason to dislike each other. Neither know a thing about the other. While they both internal dialogue how much they dislike the other, there’s 1) no reasoning 2) their actions don’t match. They’re civil, respectful, even kind to each other all while internally reminding how much they dislike each other’s sexy asses or shouldn’t (FFS why?) actually give realness to the marriage.



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